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I was summarizing an article; and my paper is due tomorrow. ( in a few hours I guess) (I know I have a lot of editing to do, but I can think straight. Any suggestions for a thesis statement?? I need my essay majorly modified… I know I have run on sentences as well any ideas on how to change that? Haha can somebody just edit my paper for me? Help me out.
Here it is…
Cause and Effects of Escherichia coli on both Man and Animal
The scientific outcome and/or facts from studies in the laboratory, investigation and surroundings sampling showed a consistency of where most outbreaks of illnesses with exposures in Farm Petting Zoo’s. These illnesses were probably from animals giving a strain of E. coli. In long terms and close contact with the animals, in which usually young children have no boundaries with these said animals. The age groups of most of these cases lead scientific research to a conclusion that this type of behavior encourages the disease to spread. The likelihood that these young children will put food and non food items into their mouths and pass the germs on to others is a great amount of probability, the closer to the area of surface, there immune systems have a harder time fighting off infection. The fact that younger children are more prone to this happening than in older children and adults makes the study even more conclusive.
The article clearly states that a high number of animals in an enclosed area are more likely to contract Ecoli. The article tells us that animals when getting nervous have loose stools and then it is spread in unsanitary quarters. Then this can be passed on to people visiting the petting zoo. With proper hygienically habits being used it was still not enough in regards to the time of use or infection that may have happened prior to the use or even children’s other skin area’s. Other studies conclude that manure on the ground and breathing it, walking on it and even it being airborne could pass to human bodies. The exposure in capacity would worsen the overall effect.
People aware of these effects would take a better protocol and take less chances of being exposed by spending less time and take better precautions in the awareness of how exposure to such animals would be harmful. Fomite transmission of E. coli means that we have further transmission or the passing of such germs through things such as blankets, strollers, shoes and the things we clean these items with can pass on these germs and have a chain reaction of exposing and passing these vital germs on and on.
There was a research done regarding interviews of said case respondents asking them the amount of contact that they had with the animals, length of visit and so on.
Most respondents were not totally honest about the amount of contact or could not recall. So with this data the conclusion comes to the fact that most had studies with the younger children contracting E. coli. National Association of State Public Health Veterinarians (NASPHV), gave updated research information regarding the amount of outbreaks reported that the petting zoo’s, fairs and animal related events take preventative steps to help insure human safety. This was a request regarding the (Compendium of Measures to Prevent Disease and Injury Associated with Animals in Public Settings, 2004.). The employed staff at such events should be trained and help to prevent further outbreaks. It was then stated that infant children should not be allowed contact with certain animals and removed from the environment immediately along with more sanitary settings for animals as well as equipping the area with better hygienically area’s for visitors. Another measure that was taken was educating and giving public awareness about zoonotic disease and risks before going into and animal environment. The time period of interactions between animals and humans might reduce risk factors and lower the microbial burden. (Passing of E. coli) All animal related events should also make sure that food areas are opposite of the areas animals are in or around. Samples from this investigation within the environments were taken and helped in coming up with this educated hypothesis.
Patients with E. coli symptoms were stated as having the following: Diarrhea, Bloody diarrhea, Constipation and other symptoms as well. This research was not only based on the amount or duration of visits with animals or contact but was also thought of as food contact, number of cases in the same area, age, dates of illnesses, and finally determining whether it was animal contact or food and the location and the percentage of population exposed and how it was passed on. In this study and hypothesis could we ask ourselves one question can they pinpoint the question as to where it was coming from and from what type of animals or would this only be an assumption and that research could have found a different source rather than the source such as the herd of goats just because the